Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Bradley's Swimming Paragraph

Room11 and miss Walters went to the pool we went to the pools to learn how to swim Monday to friday

1 comment:

  1. Hi Bradly.
    I like the words you have used in your story but i think you need to work on putting fullstops at the end.

    from Adriel


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