Below are some sentence extracts from our writing sample. We wrote about our trip to Maungakiekie.
Sentence by Howard
This week on Wednesday we travelled to Maungakiekie on a bus.
Sentence by Aldora
First we had loads of fun. We were rolling and sliding down, but I kept hitting my head on other people's mouths.
Sentence by Othaniel
Then we went into the education classroom, there was a teacher called Nadia. She showed us three rocks from volcanoes and one was from One Tree Hill. It was massive and it looked a little rusty.
Sentence by Shayne
Hi Aldora, Howard, Othaniel and Shayne ... Love hearing about how much you all enjoyed your trip to Maugakiekie.
ReplyDeleteAldora - Great start to your writing :)
Howard - Love how you described the sun beaming through the clouds and through the window ... it does make you feel good especially when you are going out for the day!:)
Othaniel - That sounds like alot of fun - except for the part where you hit into peoples mouths ouch! :P
Shayne - Sounds really interesting - I hope you enjoyed learning about it. Great writing by the way!:)